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Again, as with your other upload, this powerful composition suffers from lack of tonal contrast and I will gladly discuss my ideas with you, and give you some hints via sharing my screen with you via Skype. Let me know, when you can make/take a Skype call (in the mornings preferably) so I can offer you some insights.
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